Having fun with a Rock/ Metal Jazz Fusion Piece I composed! The 3 minute solo is in 7/8. (lots of polyrhythms)

You've done some progress since the last time i've see your video, but you still have all the same problems. You do not swing, do not groove. You playing is rhythmically flat, no matter how many odd signatures or polyrhythms you throw in. You are just rushing through the notes, even when playing at constant tempo. You've got actually better, you were rushing and playing much more unsteadily before. Now if you could try swinging a bit. The composition is hardly a composition. It is a bunch of riffs thrown together. The head establishes nothing, most of the time you just noodle over the same ostinato figure. Then you just skip to the ending. No establishment, no development, no culmination and no exit. Nothing for the mind to hang on to, no memorable melodies or cool chord colors and changes. The improvisation suffers the same problem. It is pointless, it has no coherency, no idea, no thought behind it. You show how much fun you have by banging the keyboard and making orgasmic faces to the camera (strange cheerfulness for a composition called Insanity). It does not substitute musical ideas. I would exchange all his for one tasty lick. Instead you are always trying to play lines as fast or bang chords as hard as you can.
Overall it seems that you are not playing music. You are playing Hiromi, by emulating some of the superficial features of her style and also her stage idiosyncrasies. Now, do not take this as some sort of attack. You wanted the feedback, you got it, from me as a listener foremost. I would not write all this text if i just wanted to insult, what i think is that you have lots of energy and enthusiasm that i can admire, but it is very misdirected.

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