What you are about to read does not have a tl;dr version

you could have worded this differently and people wouldn't feel bad about themselves reading this. a description or small summary shows how you yourself know what you're trying to write and that people can confide in you and what they are about to read.

sucking the devil's cock and selling your soul for some pp

i don't think this was relevant to include because you did not explain how competitivity, addiction and enjoying the game were related at all. i had only ever seen this at earlier stages when i was learning how the game works.

basic osu game, animu music and other general music, anime, manga, movies, games, porn, hentai, the internet, memes, a forum/chat community of folks

even though all these are true, there are still people that have their ways to balance things out. i don't see where you included them in here either. you can't persuade people without showing the opposite side to your arugment

most of the comments here are some form of narrative of how they understand and keep track of their own lifestyle (and they definitely do, which is something you did not applaud at all, hence an incentive for people's strong rejection responses)

another point is that writing more isn't always better; it just makes it harder to understand what you are saying (unless every word you're saying is worth diamonds)

i and many of the other commenters here appreciate your intention in explaining to people that things are bad/good/debatable, but you could have written everything in a way that wouldn't completely crush their self esteem, which is relatively important when you write self-help posts.