You are correct the profile is bland. Picture is fine. One one hand its a pretty sexy picture. I'm a sucker for female business attire and short skirts. On the other hand it feel like the perspective is overly flattering. Your private pictures should have at least one clear shot of your face, at least one shot without a filter and one full body shot that is not dishonestly flattering.
Ok on to the profile.
About me should be about you. Make it interesting and funny yet honest. Spend time on it.
Do you read? Here's two profile sentences I wrote about liking to read.
Profile 1)
I like to read.
Profile 2)
I am a prolific reader and at any given time I will be working working through a stack of books by my bed which may include anything from romantic trash fiction to modern economic theory.
See what I did there?
Please make your profile be honest about who you are. Don't make shit up to sound like the person you want to be. Have it be about the person you are. If it's genuine and you do like modern economic theory say so. If you like western novels or anime or whatever go for it.
I get a sense of who the person is. She likes to read. She has a broad and diverse interest. She's not so highbrow as to turn her nose up to trash. She's not so full of herself that she can't poke fun at herself. On and on.
She used at least one SAT word. For those following at home it was 'prolific'. Don't say you are smartintelligent and then write like a middle schooler. Throw in some big word. For god sakes use them correctly. Exception to the rule is if you can really write. Like write like Hemingway. If you can do that go for it.
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