hello gamers, can you spare 2 minutes to help me out with grammar? i have speaking and I don't know if this is grammatically correct or if it sounds wrong

hello my name is (REDACTED) and

I'm going to talk about my favorite trip ever,

a 15-day trip to Egypt that i had spent last year's summer.

We flew in a low-cost Egyptian Airline,

But despite the cost, the airplane was really comfy and the meal was surprisingly good.

When we arrived we were really tired and it was 1 a.m. so we took a taxi directly to the hotel. This hotel was a very rustic place but with a really beautiful sight of the sea, and all the meals except dinner were included, so every night we would go to the town to find places to eat.

Surprisingly, we didn't go to Egypt for the pyramids but rather to scuba dive into the marvelous red sea. Lucky for us we actually got to see sharks, turtles and even dolphins, even the owner of the hotel was amazed that we saw dolphins. In his 30 years of running that hotel and scuba diving himself, he has not seen a single one!

It was truly an amazing and really fun trip that I wouldn't change for anything.

(Hullo fixed a few things otherwise all good!

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