The stress of my current job is getting to me and I want a new one. Critique my resume please

Add an additional line between your contact info and Work Experience.

  • Your first bullet point ends with, "with an average of 10,000." As an uninformed reader I'm left guessing an average of 10,000 what?

  • The rule of thumb is that you should spell out numbers that are under ten, opposed to writing the number character.

  • How you formatted "Workday Partner Company," "Workday Consultant" and "Workday Analyst" is confusing to the eye. Are "Workday Consultant" and "Workday Analyst" job titles you held while employed at "Workday Partner Company?" If so, consider italicizing the job titles to differentiate them from one another. It's not obvious. Same goes for the other company and job titles. Find a way to discern them from one another.

  • Consider replacing "obtained" in "Obtained 3 certifications" with a better action verb. Make it sound like an accomplishment, opposed to something you acquired.

  • Reword "Founding member of non-profit (non-profit what?) aiming to bring awareness and education about artificial intelligence to those who may not be traditionally exposed to it." Specifically, "aiming to bring awareness and education about artificial intelligence to those who may not be traditionally exposed to it." You probably can cut down this sentence by half its original length.

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