How would you rewrite Dragon Ball Super?

Not the greatest ideas and I still haven’t entirely set on these ideas yet but here’s what I have so far. I won’t go too much into details since it would be too much to write but if you have any questions, just ask.

• BoG: More or less the same except it takes place after EoZ so we already have an older Goten and Trunks as well as Pan, Bra and Uub. Goku’s God form would look something like this but red hair while Vegeta’s God form would look something like this but the blue color would look more like it did during the Broly movie. The name was the form will be “Divine Super Saiyan” It would be revealed in the beginning that Beerus and Whis were somehow inactive because someone sealed the Elder Kai in the Z Sword (more on that later in the final arc). After the events, some of the Z Fighters would train more and get stronger.

• Super Hero arc: This would be more of a mini arc and with the Z Fighters that isn’t Goku and Vegeta saving the day. It’s more or less like Super Hero movie except instead of Gamma 1 and 2. The main threat would be two new Android that resembles Android 16 that will fused and become“Super Android 16.” This is because it would be a personal arc for Gohan since he’s fighting new versions of Android 16, who’s death lead to Gohan snapping and achieving SSJ2. Android 17 would also be a part of this arc. Piccolo would get his new transformation but Gohan would still have his “Ultimate” form so we won’t get Beast Gohan or anything like that.

• U6 arc: This arc would be greatly different where instead of it being a tournament arc, it will be a Dragon Ball hunting arc where Goku, Vegeta, Cabba and maybe even Uub would find the Super Dragon Balls for Beerus and Champa (kinda like the BlackStar Dragon Ball arc from GT but somehow better). We would also be introduced to Gowasu and Zamasu, who would be the Kais of U6 instead of Fuwa with Zamasu already showing his low opinions on Mortals.

The main villain would actually be Frost, who also wants the Super Dragon Balls. His main henchmen would be Botamo, Magetta, and a character named Robin, who has wings made of metal and can be used as weapons like Hawks from MHA but his right hand man and Goku’s main opponent before Frost would be Hit. Hit was a former legendary assassin of U6 until he loss to Frost in a fight but instead of killing him, Frost offers Hit a position as his right hand man. Hit reluctantly agreed but he was never truly loyal to Frost.

Goku hasn’t achieve Divine Super Saiyan since his fight with Beerus but achieved it again through his fight with Hit and Vegeta achieved it through fighting Frost alongside Goku and Hit after Hit betrays Frost.

• Black arc: Instead of Goku Black, we would get Goten Black. The Future Trunks we see is not from the Android timeline but is actually from the future of the main timeline. Goten Black has killed many people including Uub, Pan and Bra. Goku and Vegeta, who were old and way passed their prime were also killed by Goten Black. After finding out about Goten Black and the future, the Trunks of the main timeline broke off his friendship with Goten and blaming him for what he might do. This arc would involve Goku, Vegeta and Trunks fighting and losing to Goten Black, who is actually Zamasu in their 1st fight but in the 2nd one, Trunks gains Divine Super Saiyan and defeats him.

• ToP arc: Zeno would remember the Tournament and have the Grand Priest to tell U7 and 9 to bring three warriors for the Expo match. The fights would be the same except the announcement of the Universes being destroyed doesn’t happen until after Goku and Bergamo fight. Because of what happened with Zamasu, Zeno begins to wonder if he was right about mortals and decided to use the tournament to destroy the universes with low mortal levels but in reality, the tournament would be test to be whether Zamasu was right or wrong about mortals. This would show that while Zeno is childish, he’s actually very observant and is somewhat of a deep thinker. Toppo would not be in the expo match and will not fight Goku.

U7’s team would be the same except Majuub would be introduced and would take Roshi’s place. Haven’t figured it out yet but the Earthlings managed to train and get stronger so now they surpassed SSJ. Maybe they trained under Shin or something and unlocked their potential. U6 would also be the same except the Yardrat from U2 and a human type Earthling would take Rota and one of the Namekians place while Rota and another random fighter would be in U2 and the Ronin would also be part of U6’s team.

The weaker Z fighters would gets some major moments and even have new techniques to use before going out on a high note. I would want Jiren to be less stoic and have more dialogues earlier on to give us more insight in his philosophy and his backstory would also be revealed much sooner. Also I know this would be a major change to his character but I would have him be a GoD candidate instead of Toppo and not a mortal stronger than a GoD. Dyspo’s design would be slightly different to differentiate him from a Beerus and Champa (like make him blue with green eyes). Goku’s trump card against Jiren (before he gets UI) would be Divine Super Saiyan with Kaioken. Vegeta would obtain UE Omen as well.

As for Hit in my rewrite, he actually can’t use his Time-Skip in the World of Void since there’s not time to be stopped but after fighting Goku, Vegeta and Frost, he realizes that his Time-Skip is a crutch so he trained to get stronger should his Time-Skip not be enough to win. In the final fight against, Vegeta is the last man standing and wins the ToP with Goku and Gohan eliminating themselves and Jiren.

Fights that would happen:

17 vs Dyspo: I would have this fight happen instead of Hit vs Dyspo since I kinda want Hit to be more of a threat that would be saved for Jiren. Dyspo would be a problem for 17 since Dyspo moved fast enough to hit 17 before he summons a barrier and with his enhanced hearing, Dyspo is able to track 17 and avoid sneak attacks from him without the need to sense his non existent Ki. There would be many different fights that will happen like Dyspo fighting 17 instead of Hit and Hit fighting Maji Kayo it would be too much to list right now.

• Moro arc: This would be the final arc that will end Super. Moro is revealed to be the one that sealed Elder Kai to the Z Sword, which lead to Beerus and Whis being inactive. Maybe his motivation involves getting rid of the Gods in general. One thing for sure is that after absorbing 73, he would still have the Goat design but have 73’s color scheme and eyes. I would try to make the final battle better with the inclusion of Goten, Trunks and Majuub and Goku and Vegeta would be able to master UI and UE to defeat Moro.

That’s all I have for now. Again, not the greatest ideas but it’s the best I can think of right now

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