There are several visual elements that you haven't added any FX for, so there's a mismatch between the beefiness and volume of sound that this looks like it should be making vs. what's actually being heard.

Most noticeably, where are the car engine and tire FX? We start out sandwiched between two cars, approaching a transformer vehicle, with another vehicle to the right of the transformer vehicle, but they're all missing the required FX. You're also missing the sounds of asphalt being ripped out of the ground, which starts about 4 seconds in.

This kind of approach is alright for a stylized moment where the sound seems to drop away and you want to focus the audience in on something very intentionally (and it actually works for the brief moment we're going under the underpass and the lighting darkens), but for this moment in the movie and moreso to show off your skills as a sound designer, I think you'd be better off trying to to a much more straight-down-the-middle sound edit and mix. Analyze the frame a little more and make sure you're following "see a car, hear a car."