[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread November 13, 2018

Heyyyy yall. Wanna get some feedback on this cause im pretty sure this is one of the hardest things ive ever made. It's kinda like FUN! by Vince Staples + I Love It by Pump n Ye. I never go this minimal melodically n shit either so this is experimentation with my style for sure.

https://soundcloud.com/baileyymusicc/stick-upp/s-Z5lo9

Also a mixing question someone might be able to help me with: This 808 goes hard as fuck on my headphones but i basically can't even hear it on my laptop speakers or my iphone speakers. I've made 808s audible on them before but it always kinda been a happy accident lol, how could I do that with this beat? its important since the 808 basically is the melody.

also i'll return feedback cause im a nice boy

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