Well done. You've got a strong voice....it completely changed how I see the character.

She may have been a fraud of a knight, by rule of law, but you managed to make it believable that she might deserve to be one anyways....a rather impressive feat, given all the terrible things she's doing throughout.

Overall, for a first attempt, this was surprisingly good. There were a few times where it felt like you just muscled through a line, but there were others where you displayed some real range and a great sense of humor.

You have a lot of potential.

Also, I don't know if it was just my imagination, but it sounded like you almost laughed and broke character? If so, I'm flattered. It's good to know you had as much fun acting it as I did writing it.