Regardless of the technical errors, I feel you have potential. As others have said this is far above most fan made content. And it's the plot, for lack of a better word, that I enjoy so much. More than the animation or voice acting. You started with a great idea, which is where most people fail. It doesn't have to be innovative and completely new to have worth, it's still great.

I want Spectres to be this. I want to see what the Tenno can do when we're not worried about "balance". I want to see asymmetrical warfare at its nastiest. I want to be a freedom fighter instead of sneaky space police. Fuck yes, lets teach them fear.

You didn't luck into a good omelette, but I wont say you're ready to go pro either because you obviously know how far you have to go. Also I can't pick out and name the errors, but I did realize this was fan made just by watching.

Creative work takes practice like anything else. I know from watching my Aunt struggle as a painter and from raising a musician. My kid's got innate talent (as I feel you have) but every time he coasts and relies on just that he's unhappy with the results. Its a lesson we both learned.

You've got work to do, but you got far more potential than people cranking out the usual fan made edits of cut scenes set to Linkin Park. You should feel comfortable when people recognize that at least.