Ok so you're a writer and just consider me your Chef Ramsay.
YOU DONKEY
Hitting rock bottom? More like hitting every fucking cliche in the book. I would've almost believed it if it weren't so irrelevant because if this were non-fiction it's such a fuckign common story. You don't have to be so dramatic, it takes away from the perceived authenticity. Makes you look like a sob
disconnected, good, "stress and pressure" trite, bordering on meaningless. not even one specific to elucidate it.
"only caring about one person and that not even being myself" emotional fallacy. when you care about other people it's more moving/ motivational than yourself, dimwit.
neglecting health, hygeine, social circle: expected. Ambitions: shows immaturity. Ambitions are pipedreams. They're symptoms of unresolved pain. You're either succesful and don't call it ambition because you acknoweldge particular specifics, or you're not ambitious and you move on.
next line is almost satifactory, except for mentioning energy. Energy is an empty placeholder that people who don't know what they're talking about say.
"something drastic". are you shy? no, you're sharing this. So, it's either not actually drastic, or it didn't happen. Seriously, it's like you're just writing out a recipe and u can't fucking cook.
"i finally saw how miserable I was actually doing" You're a foreign person practicing your english through lies you twat.
mirror, clothes, shaven, nails, haircut, smile, do you take writing tips from Covergirl? This isn't a fucking commercial, people aren't actually about appearance like this. You'd have to be unbelievably shallow for this fact alone to stand. Self image isn't actually about the mirror fucktwat.
get it together, i don't know where to go from here. I don't see the passion to become a writer.