;-; hi there sdrow ;-; what're you doing in these parts?

This is going to sound incredibly random, but on IRC there's a few persons with English as a second or third language who have questions about a... loli h-story. It's called "Traveler's Matchless Island Story" by Kirie Masanobu and can be googled. I'm personally not interested in it so one person suggested I contact someone on here who might be. After a cursory glance at some users who might be interested based on what they're into I saw your username and decided to contact you. If you're not interested then that's fine, you can just ignore this PM. You can reply to the questions whenever you want and at however much length you want (although more detail = better since, as I said, English is second or third language for most of those asking the questions.) You'll be explaining the English-language translation of the story BTW, it's not a request to read the original Japanese. Don't be concerned about your replies being subjective, you can speculate or assume about the story at will. An anon who knows Japanese says that there's quite a bit of thought text by the main character in the original Japanese but the translator didn't include this text in English and so they were left out (probably because the translator either forgot or they were too big to fit in English. They're supposed to be continuations of the main character's thoughts on page 30, in some of the white spaces on the pages.) Some dialogue was a bit off as well. These cases will be pointed out to help you with answering questions. Some will have questions of anons below them. Anyway, assuming you are interested... On page 5 the main character's thoughts at the bottom are a lot longer in the Japanese original and are in a confused/concerned tone. The anon asks you to explain them since they may be relevant to his later behavior: "Here the children are naked... it's the first time I've seen a child like this..." "For children to walk around like this among adults was unthinkable to me... yet, on this island, it was commonplace..." "Even though they were children, for some reason I could not stop staring at their bodies..." (the last thought is in a worried tone and there's originally a sfx besides the sweat-drop signifying his heart skipping a beat.) What's the loli doing on the bottom-left panel of page 31 (and why)? What's with the shocked reaction of the main character on pages 30-31? What's with his scared attitude to the loli and his comments/thoughts on image 31? (one anon asked if the main character's thought about stuff being burned on the upper-left of page 31 is a reference to drugs, but the anon who knows Japanese and who read the original clarifies that no drugs are involved and that the main character actually says "But... that's the little girl's..." (in reference to the mother on the top panel.) As for the fire, the anon explains that what's going on is a bunch of tropical wood is put on fire on page 28 to initiate the festival, and on pages 30-31 some villagers are fanning the flames to signal the next part of the festival.) Thought, bottom-right, same page 31: "This child is... and... we're in full view of everyone...." "If others were to see this, then..." (an anon asks what's with these thoughts) On page 32 how come he replies with "it's not that, but I already have Akitsu" considering his negative thoughts/words about the loli before that? (his tone in the Japanese original is confused and scared) What relevance does what he sees Akitsu doing have for his behavior on subsequent pages? (Thoughts, bottom left, page 32: "After seeing this, Akitsu faded from my mind...") Thoughts, right, page 33: "Everyone is... having...." "Even though we're in full view... no one is intervening....?" (an anon asks for explanation of these two thoughts) Thought, upper-left, page 34: "But... she's just a child... if she were to insert it, then...." On page 35 how come his behavior/attitude seems to change, and how come he starts having sex with the loli? What's he doing to the loli on the middle and bottom panels and what's with his expressions on them? (the middle-right panel in the original has some breathing sfx from the main character and on the middle panel a "squeeze" sfx. Bottom panel has a repeated up and down motion sfx) Thought, top-right, page 35: "She's not in distress....?" Thought, mid-right, same page: "Even though the villagers left us [or stopped paying attention to us] for themselves, allowing me to stop her... I...." Thought, bottom-right, same page: "She... feels so...." (anons ask for explanations of these three thoughts, all of them have an overall confused and hesitant tone) On page 36 how come the shota joins in? What are the reasons the main character takes issue with the shota joining in, and how come he continues having sex anyway? Thought, upper-right, page 36: "Even though she's a little girl... as I look at her my body is..." [has a bit of a confused tone] Thoughts, mid-right, same page: "Suddenly, the little's girl's... [it's a reference to her brother joining in]" "Two children... doing these things...." [anon says both thoughts are negative in tone] "Seeing this... my body is... reacting even more strongly..." [also negative in tone, with a bit of confusion] (one anon doesn't get the "body" references and why the main character mentions them, or why he has a confused tone. an anon also asks what happens in the page to cause his "body" to react "even more strongly" than before once shota starts doing the loli, and why would it?