Wow!
This is some seriously beautifully intense poetry, capturing and professing your love!
I like it!
That said...
I'm afraid, however, it is TOTALLY wasted on a Reddit audience, at least for now. Although, maybe eventually in a few more hours it will be recognized... but probably not!
If this isn't much recognized in the next few hours, or day or two...
Then just save the text, and then just DELETE it!
And consider writing poetry about your love, and affair, and connection you two had.
It's the stuff of Nabokovesque poetry, and other similar such poetry from the 20th century.
An experience and love which you can expand upon, and maybe even write great novels about!