Profile length

This is this beginning of my profile which isn't an about me just something I wrote. I want to keep it, but maybe I should take it out:

"Your standing with the door held open, waiting for me to cross the threshold. As I walk pass you my perfume follows me. 'What is it?' you think. I smile up at you because you surpass my five foot three inches by several of your own. I say thank you as my hand lightly caresses your chest. I'll choose to not take your chivalry for granted. Not many men would keep hold to tradition. You do. But only at times...

'So, I'm here. I came' I say to you with my back turned. You take that extended moment I've given you to appreciate my derrière. While thinking of the things you'll like to do to it, you rasp 'I can always count on you to show up'. I turn around, my eyes to yours, I feel the tension. I see the slight dip in your brow, and mischief in your eyes. I'm thinking I may have pushed a little too far last time.

I can't stop it, on their own volition my eyes drop down, and slowly I bring them up. Admiring what I see, but I won't give you too much 'Well sir, you look like you could use something'. Your smirk says you know tonight's going to be interesting. "

/r/sugarlifestyleforum Thread