These were written for me during my time at the Base Honor Guard, I was wondering if you guys could look them over, maybe critique them, then rate them, strongest to weakest? I don't really know what to look out for with this kind of stuff as I'm only an A1C. Thank you.
- Performed HG msn; executed 44 funerals/14 Colors posted/204 hrs of svcs--ensured 4 state AOR received mil honors
- Executed 3 retirement ceremonies; led 4 mbr Colors detail in precision drill mvmt--honored 85 yrs of service to AF
- Commenced NASCAR Sprint Cup Series Race; executed Colors detail--showcas'd USAF pro image f/2.8M viewers
- Lead trainer; dedicated 160hrs/taught 38 personnel on 39 pos/206 movements/6 ceremonies--incr'd HG readiness
- Provided mil honors during AD funeral; exceptional firing party mbr--incr'd outstanding AF image for family/ldrship
- Marched in REDACTED St. Patricks Day parade; presented USAF flag--up held tradition and Honor for 1K in attendance
- 18-D ALS graduation; led Colors detail f/40 future AF leaders/100 attendees--lauded by REDACTED Wing Command staff
- Landings Colors detail; led tm through precise LRS CoC ceremony--ensured AF traditions upheld f/mbrs & attendees