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FADE IN:

EXT. FIELD- DAY

A snowy field. A tall hill. A tree with dying leaves in autumnal colors. ZOE, 19, a red head wearing a green summery dress, lies on her back in the snow, eyes open, staring up. NELL, 25, tall and well dressed, handsome, walks up besides Zoe and leans over her.

NELL: Hello, Zoe. What are you doing?

ZOE: Hello, Nell. You’re blocking my view.

NELL: Hmmm. Well, Nell will do.

Nell lies down in the snow besides Zoe, stares up.

NELL: What are we watching?

ZOE: My mother.

INT. CLOSET- DAY

JOYCE, 50, dowdy looking, sits in a very small room which contains only the chair she sits on, a door, and a clock on the wall. She watches the clock. Its hands spin around quickly with loud ticks.

EXT. FIELD- DAY

NELL: What is she doing?

ZOE: Waiting for my funeral.

NELL: Oh. What are you doing?

ZOE: The same, I suppose. Is it time yet?

NELL: No. Not yet.

ZOE: Alright. What’s next, then?

INT. CLOSET- DAY

The door opens. NURSE, 30, an average looking man wearing scrubs, enters. He stands in front of the doorway. Joyce does not look at him.

NURSE: Joyce Douglas?

JOYCE: Yes.

NURSE: We’ve been looking for you.

JOYCE: This is a nice room.

NURSE: It’s supposed to be a janitor’s closet. I’m not even sure why it’s empty, I forgot it was here.

JOYCE: Are you going to make me leave?

NURSE: I… It doesn’t seem like you want to stay. What’s the point of being here if you’re off in some closet instead of in your daughter’s room?

JOYCE: I’m not sure I should be there. I don’t think they want me to be.

INT. HOSPITAL ROOM- DAY

Zoe lies in a hospital bed, with a breathing tube and IVs in her arms. She is hooked up to a heart monitor, which beeps intermittently. The room is full of a CROWD, holding get well balloons, cards, flowers, etc. Standing in the crowd is STEVEN, 50, weathered and expensively dressed, and AMELIA, 35, not quite pretty, in a white skirt and a nice blouse. The room is small and the crowd is smushed in tight. They all stare at Zoe.

EXT. FIELD- DAY

NELL: Seems like a lot of people are worried about you.

ZOE: You sound surprised.

NELL: Most of the people who end up here aren’t well liked.

ZOE: Oh. Is that why most people come to you?

NELL: Well, it’s more I come to them, isn’t it?

ZOE: Deal with you, then.

NELL: I’m not sure it’s the reason they deal with me, nothing that direct. But loneliness makes people more desperate. More likely to be in a situation that does lead them to me. To make a deal.

ZOE: ...I’ve never understood people.

NELL: You don’t count yourself among them?

ZOE: I never made a deal with you.

NELL: (smiling) No. You made a bet.

ZOE: Don’t you leer at me!

NELL: I’m just being friendly.

ZOE: “Friendly.” That doesn’t seem like something in your job description.

NELL: Really? Friendliness is quite useful to me. It’s a salesman’s best weapon, the way he gets his foot in the door.

ZOE: Is that how you see yourself? A salesman?

NELL: Aren’t I?

ZOE: I never felt particularly sold. Just… backed into a corner. More like I was a mouse being played with by a cat.

NELL: You always had a choice. That’s how this works. There has to be a choice.

ZOE: ...Ha! Hahahahaha!

NELL: You made your choice.

INT. HOSPITAL ROOM- DAY

Joyce enters. The crowd all turn to look at her. Joyce walks forward and kneels next to Zoe’s bedside. Joyce grabs Zoe’s hand. The nurse follows her in.

STEVEN: Joyce. You can’t be here.

NURSE: Sir, she has just as much right to-

STEVEN: (talking to Joyce) You need to go.

JOYCE: She… she’s my daughter, too. You can’t keep me away from her.

STEVEN: You don’t get to say that anymore.

JOYCE: She’s- you-

STEVEN: (interrupting) Dammit, Joyce! You can’t say that anymore! Not her, not in her hospital room as she dies because of you!

AMELIA: Steven…

STEVEN: (to Amelia) She has to leave. She has to…

JOYCE: I won’t hurt her, I won’t, I-

AMELIA: (interrupting) The damage is done, Joyce.

STEVEN: You have no right to be here. You have no right.

AMELIA: You should go.

JOYCE: (desperately) I’m her mother.

AMELIA: I was more of a mother to her than you ever were.

JOYCE: You kept me from her!

STEVEN: If you had just let things be, if you just stayed away from us, none of this would have happened. My daughter wouldn’t be stuffed with tubes, hanging on by a thread. I wouldn’t be-

JOYCE: You can’t take her from me, not again!

STEVEN: She’s already gone! ...She’s already gone. God, I can’t even look at you.

Joyce looks around the room, trembling. The crowd stares at her. Joyce gets up and leaves.

NURSE: How can you just…?

AMELIA: You have no idea what that woman has done.

EXT. FIELD- DAY

ZOE: Did you have to use her?

NELL: I’m sorry?

ZOE: My mother. Did you have to use her just to get to me.

NELL: I work through the world, not in spite of it.

ZOE: It could have been anyone, it could have been a drunk stranger on the highway or an old boyfriend with a bat. You chose her.

NELL: I had no obligation to make this easier on you. Quite the opposite, in fact.

ZOE: She wasn’t a part of this. She never made any deals.

NELL: I don’t just deal in deals. You yourself have made a bet. Come now, you had to know you wouldn’t be the only one impacted by this.

ZOE: Maybe I didn’t think about it.

NELL: A thing like this tends to ripple.

ZOE: I don’t recall that being in the fine print.

NELL: There was no actual-

ZOE: It’s just an expression, Nell.

NELL: Nell. You’re going to keep calling me that, then.

ZOE: You haven’t given me some other name to call you.

NELL: People are always trying to give me names, but none of them ever quite fit. Still, I’m surprised you’d pick that one.

ZOE: Surprised? Why? You borrowed his face, why not his name?

NELL: I’m not opposed to it. Just surprised you’d want to call me by his name.

ZOE: He doesn’t mean anything in particular to me.

NELL: No? Your soul is a lot to bet on a man you’re not particularly partial to.

ZOE: He made me a promise.

BEGIN FLASHBACK:

Zoe leans out over a very nice old looking stone balcony. The wind is strong and whips through her hair. She is wearing a t-shirt and jeans and is barefoot. Nell stands a few feet behind her, in a suit.

ZOE: Do you remember, you said you’d do anything for me. Did you mean that?

NELL: ...Yes.

ZOE: (turning to face him) Would you die for me?

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